by sr71plt
Although I thought the story was extremely well written, I did think that Evan's character was a mess with the whole conquering of virgin attitude. I thought the sex was hot as well as his familia envoys progressed but a little more humility would have been better.
A grammar snob with no sense of the double entendre, perhaps, Worshipper622? *smile*
Tail has many definitions, including (1) the elongated appendage on the posterior part of some animals, (2) the hindmost part of something, (3) to follow, and (4) to provide with a tail. Tale means (1) a recital of events, (2) a story, or (3) a lie. So tale usually has to do with telling stories of some kind, while tail involves one thing being behind another.
Just a grammar snob, weighing in! (Yes, I know I ended with a preposition.)
You left a lot of openings to not follow up on Evan and his Family. Now that he has met his Mother,Aunt,Sister . and Impregnated his Step-Mom it's time for Evan to get with it.