All Comments on 'Center Piece'

Loved it!! Please keep writing!!

This is a great well written story but the odd phrase seemed out of place, behind her mound? wtf? lol their was a few others but over all this story was fantastic!

this is such a hot story!!

Cant wait to read more

its me!

such a yummy story me and my hubby enjoyed it very much. you are a great writer ;)

Lissie Bella

I apologize for the typos in the last comment. Typing on a not-so-smart phone!

I personally gave this a four as I think something was missing. I would have lived a little bondage and a little less sweetness, but that is just my kink ;) Maybe you could do another chapter... Actually I could see this going many places. A fun twist could bed that the housemates could have been the ones to post the ad that Autumn saw in the beginning of the story. More please! Bookmarking your page to read the rest of your stories after I finish the rest of the contest entries. Hope you place!

I liked this story. It, ahem, worked for me. ;)

I wish I was Autumn.... js

Well written, this story has all the elements of a great fantasy, including the bisexual part of the women, not for the men. That, to my perverted mind, was what the author missed. A free for all, without labels and inhibitions. Just pure, unadulterated pleasure.

Good story. Little fade here and there but kept me interested the whole time

Very nice story I really liked it

very good title

Very well done, very descriptive, felt like I was in the room awaiting my turn. Thank you

That was a great read. Thanks