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by Wilson Spalding

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Job!

Great job. It's one of the first times I've seen an author resist the temptation of having the witnessing couple walk away rather than join the action.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
This Was Much Better

Than Sharing with good friends who don't bring anything to share with you! - Chapter 1 was written well but degraded your effort with her with him at your insistance - sick unrealistic shit guy. Cuckolding self is disgusting crude and unbelieveably depraved.

TatankaBillTatankaBillabout 1 year ago

Still reading, still enjoying.

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