All Comments on 'Chained and Chastened'

Hm, you realized that you posted the story four times in a row, right?

Also you migh't want to go over the names in the story again, Elsie is sometimes Elise, sometimes Emily, and who is Justine? That name pops up once in a context i don't get.

Other than that, ok story.

I can't even begin to imagine how long it took you to write this, to inspire you, but it was just amazing.. it had a great story line, pleasing to both girls and guys.. I love it. Just love it. ;D

You posted this twice in the same post. What are you an ASSHOLE. I rated you a 1 because you're a shitass.

I cannot say enough good things about this novel. It has all the the things we expect in porn -nudity, tying, rape, handcuffing, beating, whipping, but it also has excellent an excellent plot, a main character we care about, excellent secondary characters. A tour de force.

Good story. Technical problems with the posting (story repeated 4x) and some other minor issues.