All Comments on 'Chalk and Cheese Ch. 04'

this is getting exciting. please do a follow up FAST!! :)

dont keep us waiting

Excellent.

Im loving this story. please dont wait too long to post another chapter.

Great update. Can't wait to hear what Vic has to say. Don't keep us waiting too long.

This is an interesting story. Like the opposites attract and the fact that the characters are complex. Update soon.

How is Tori going to deal with the banshee of a sister. That was a very entertaining chapter, look forward to you updating soon.

I feel as if I am watching a movie simply by reading your story. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next. It's as if you have casted a spell...I can't help but to be drawn into your web. I wonder what else will Tori have to face.

i do not understand tori's reaction ,nor why is roni going nuts, but i am sure this is coming soon, and please make it soon

I agree with the other poster that stated they didn't understand why Roni is so upset and so in her sisters business. My goodness, poor Tori was dating that feckless idiot that left her at the altar because she didn't do it for him, Was he physically abusive to her as well. I believe that he was emotionally abusive and probably stingy with his affections as well. So Tori yelled at her mother when her mother was trying to warn her against the idiot and Roni was encouraging her to still date and then marry the guy. The amazing thing here is that Roni is still trying to run her sisters life...why? Roni is married and one would think that she would put more effort into her marriage than trying to constantly set her sister up on dates.

Ok, as for Greg...does he have a girlfriend? Who was the woman that was blowing up his phone because when they left the restaurant and he checked his phone he had a lot of messages. I hope that he is not playing with Tori's affections because that would be cruel.

Looking forward to reading more. Thanks

Tone is spot on and your characters are terrific. I don't have a sister, but have friends who are quite close to theirs. They are ALWAYS nose deep in each other's lives and NEVER stay in their own gardens (as in if you don't meddle, you don't care). Usually glad it isn't me, but it is loads of fun to watch. Carry on.

that was awesome..... cant wait for more

I Love this story I can't wait for the next chapter.

loving it!!! update soon please!

Why is her sister such a bitch?! I mean doesn't she has her own life and her own husband to keep her busy why is she so stressed on what Tori does and who she is with, Roni needs to get put in her place asap because she sounds like the typical high class gold digger, since he rich and has a good job then he is perfect. I wish someone would tell her where to get off, I would hate to have a sister or mother like her. She acts like she is so much better and above people who is not like her

Tori is wonderful and a breath of fresh air, she is quirky and honest and just plain cool and GREG is just freaking hot and smart and wonderful, he sounds like a dream boat, and Mike needs to grow a pair of balls and tell his wife to just SHUT UP sometimes. But I love the budding friendship of Carrie and Tori! And Lucas was a cunt...lol

The brother-in-law is too funny...LOL. Liking this series. I just wish there was a way to rate the whole thing at once.

Im with u destin