All Comments on 'Challenge Her'

by MrIllusion

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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Excellent story. What happened during the three years break that we see. She evidently went back to his hometown with him. Lots of story there. What's going to happen next. So many possibilities. So many chapters. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good, But...

...but went a bit vague at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More?

There certainly is more to this story. I hope you will add to it some day.

Five stars in my book!

ragaeragaeabout 7 years ago
Brilliant story

That was just sooo good, kept me mesmerised till the very last. But what really happened after you were discharged?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
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Intoxicating and perfectly timed. The end is amazing if skim-read post orgasm.. still leaves you wanting more. More?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yes, More....

This is a very sweet tale. Please extent the story. I would truly appreciate more.

blackknight314blackknight314about 5 years ago
What a lucky fucker.

I've never been in a hospital gave you that much time between visits from a nurse or doctor. I have to admit that all of the sex did happen to be quickies though. Good job. I'll try another from your list.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Very nice very loving....

manhassomanhassoabout 3 years ago

Perfect pacing of the action, and I loved how hot you described the sex scenes, but keeping them romantic at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Great story, though the ending seemed rushed.

anchorman021anchorman021about 2 months ago

excellent story! great anticipation, living with limitations and planning for more ... once in my life I had such a girl! Its good to remember her after all the years of growing and changing

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