All Comments on 'Chance: A Day in May Ch. 11'

i love this story...i waited up for the midnight hour of story changes just to read it and now must sleep my few hours for work tomorrow..heh...its addicting. i know this story is closing soon and i hate to see it go but im sure the ending will be just as wonderful if not more so, than the beginning. keep up the great work. respectfully fan in Texas

I really love your love scenes, Troubador. It's pretty much as I used to make love to women. Soft, smooth and wonderful.

I don't quite understand her guilt feelings now except maybe she still feels she betrayed her love. It could easily be the end of their relationship. But time can change many things. Maybe the fact that she sensed his distress will help her reassess her feelings for him and realize that she loves him as much as needs him.

Definitely looking forward to your resolution of this love story!

Troubador:

The emotions, the love making, and interaction are superb. However in Chapter 11 I have a feeling that you left your wrung-out emotions in shreds on the floor. A doff of my hat to you. This story is as good as it can get. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Troub you make me get out the dictionary. Who the hell are you shakespear! I run across words I never heard in my life. I am thankful to brush up on my vocabulary that I can't use with my friends, because their all illiterate. You weave a great tale and I look forward to using my dictionary. With very high regards . Luie

for a beautiful, heartwarming romantic story. I will be terribly disappointed if Duncan and Helen do not wind up together.

I’ve enjoyed this fantasy for its effort to show a story that could be real between two people. Looking forward to the conclusion.

Good entertainment

Thank you

Again, too long for what it was.