by TxRad
...but a rather abrupt ending. I did like the verbal sparring between the two, really gave emotion to the piece.
This story is pure joy -- glorious, juicy, superhot & deeply loving copulations between a husband and wife separated for 30 years. Now they are much more mature, personally and spiritually. And each is a better lover. Their couplings bring deeper satisfaction than when they were young and fucked each other like rabbits. Their amorous skills are more accomplished and make them laugh-out-loud ecstatic in the hot tub and the bed. This is a truly wonderful love story, even though the ending is abrupt. GREAT STUFF!!
I read on your bio about writing stories that were happy and upbeat, and this one certainly is! I spend a lot of time in my day job dealing with human suffering and reading a story like this, so full of good and well being ... well let me just say it has really put a great spin on my day! Looking forward to reading more of your stories!
How I would love to relive this with an old flame! Such wonderful thoughts are filling my head!
Yes, a minor issue, I know, but they pay the bills.
I love the fact that the story DID NOT leave me with the question of "and". There seems to be a comfortable ending to the story.
I loved it, you write about emotions so well. I wanted them to get back together again and have a wonderful loving
relationship.
*****Good storytelling with HOT SEX. What happen to the son? Thanks for sharing.
An okay story that was good at times. I agree with another who was aggravated by him not calling the client. Both characters were supposedly more mature than when they divorced. So it seemed dumb to ignore responsibility to the business.