All Comments on 'Chance Encounter Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great

I continue to enjoy your story very much.

Boyd

duddle146duddle146almost 18 years ago
Great Read!

Marvelous continuation of an interesting story. In this chapter the Writer turns up the intrigue and suspense heightens. A very enjoyable read by a very clever Writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Keep it coming

Great Story only problem is too long between chapters. Keep it coming.

PEATBOGPEATBOGover 17 years ago
The action is a bit too slow!!!!

I don’t know, Paul is far too paranoid and over confident in his own abilities! He is also a fervent womanizer but that may be typical of ‘a man of power’. Well the shit hasn’t hit the fan quite yet but I am sure that it will before long. Can't wait for the next chapter. Pete.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE HILLS AND TRAPS ONE MUST NAVIGATE

just to prove a right that was trampled. TK U MLJ LV NV

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