All Comments on 'Chance Encounter - Day 01'

by fraankhardy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
But...you didn't say which one got the job!

That's the only reason why I read the story. :-)

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosover 10 years ago
Get an editor!!

There were six or seven errors/problems in just the first paragraph! I only read three or four more paragraphs (up until the button was fixed) before I became tired of translating what you had written into sentences which made sense, and gave up on continuing. -Rei

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Female comment

I enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
well done

loved it ... will read the next part now ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
gud

its a good read ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
female comment

i really enjoyed the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
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good read ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
good one

its a good read ... Debbie

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