All Comments on 'Change of Plans'

I liked this story but it would have been better if you could have kept your characters straightened out. Pete is the husband of Dottie, but you call him Jeff for a while. You kept getting Dottie and Jeannie mixed up as to what they were doing to each other. I think simply reading the story over again before publishing it would have corrected these errors. Good story though, keep writing.