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I am not a writer of literature, I only enjoy reading.

I stopped reading your story on page 2 when I got totally confused with your characters' dreams and the story.

It is a pity for you do have a storyline that can work, only it doesnt (for me anyway)

The conversations were really lovely and erotic.

MaryR

I loved this story is there a second coming? If so make it soon.

Your hero/main character is a wimp. Poor example of a man in love. The dreams were good, but the main story lacked!

Ironic: your Lit name and just how badly written this was.

Grammar, tense, person, spelling, dialogue, italics... I could go on, (and on), but I won't. For some unexplained reason, you think you can write. You can't.

I thought the dreams were a little confusing and unnecessary.But the plot was good.

Please continue the story because i am sure that Jon isn't going to let Rachel simply drive away.Please continue....Thanx

no way can you end it like this

The main character is bold in his dreams, but a dumba?? . How can you end a story in tragedy? He needs to chase her down and find her, apologize and profess his love for her.

Please More?

The hell just happened here? Is this all?

You call this a story? I see that you have started another but I want waste my time reading it..............

when is the second one coming?

This story had no continuity, proper story line and ended badly my 2year old could serriously written this

SkyBox and Pounds sterling on the electricity pre-pay meter, High School and Little League, come on tighten it up and choose one or the other; if they're in England, stick to that idiom, otherwise it just looks schizophrenic and messy as they flip from one reality to the other at random - and check your spelling, goddammit, if you're going to call yourself literature writer, try and make some sort of effort to live up to it...No Stars

How can you leave a story this good unfinished? My only minor annoyance with this story is the confusion between what reality and what's dream. But this is so good...having this left unfinished has messed up my whole day!!!!

Excellent story . But 2nd ch coming???

It started out good, but it got really weird really quick (and by weird I don't mean incest). It was like there was a big piece of the story that was missing, between her coming in while he was watching the cops TV show and then suddenly they were having sex? And the italics implied that it might've been a dream, but after it went back to non-italics, it didn't pick up where it'd left off before? At that point, I stopped reading and just started skimming, and found the rest of the story to be a mess too.

It started good, so I don't want to slam the writing, but I couldn't finish it. I don't get this story. Maybe if the author rewrote it...but who wants to rewrite their story after publishing it? I won't rate this one, as I don't have the heart to give it a low rating and can't give it a good rating.