by Maguppy Puppy
nice job i must say that u have the feel for this kind of thing. i think that the next show that u parody should be buffy. i was thinking that a good one would be towards the end of the last season when there'll be buffy, willow, faith, and all the slayers in training. but excellent job on this story i look forward to reading more
My wife watches this show ALL THE TIME - I even had to buy her the DVDs. I've wanted to nail Holly M. Combs for ages.
Good sex, top notch characterizations, good pace, but I did notice a few typos or incorect words (no/know) that took me out of the moment a little. Juts proof a little more next time and you are golden! Your consistent "hot" ratings don't lie. I especially liked the excuse to get a monster dick in the mix.
I'm tempted to try The Charmed Ones myself but I don't think I could do any better.
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Well since my feed back is the only, mines the most. I think that peter should continue and maybe have the three sisters get him back sonehow or he brings them into the real world to live with him. Still maybe powers or different ones. Nice job overall on story so far.