by Maguppy Puppy
Yet another great GREAT story by you. Glad to see Velma get some credit as well. Well written and left me wanting as always. Keep it up :D Can't wait to see the next instalment.
Of course I am prejudiced in favor of any story that has Velma and her massive mammories in it.
I'm loving this entire series.
I wouldn't mind seeing his boss finally realizing what's up..maybe following him to an O.C. episode or Lost or 24.
I also agree that the OC would be hot... Mischa Barton is yummy! But good job on the last few installments, glad to see it back again.
I really enjoyed this story... can't wait for your other ones. Glad I'm not the only one who thinks Velma has a big pair of tits hidden underneath her orange sweater!
I am loving the whole series, keep it up. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
I really like this series, it is very good!!! No more cartoon characters though. Would like to see more charmed later on and some more buffy (little sis and buffy baby). New good shows could be roswell (hot girls), esp. smallville (mrs. kent, lana, lois,and chloe- all need it) , 7th heaven (easy reasons to see why-huge knockers), and gilmore girls (violate both).
I would really like to read some more of this series... how about him going into that show Stargate or Smallville or how about CSI
hey add some more to this. maybe going into the Dark ANgel show with jessica alba or smallville. but awesome series man. best on the whole site!
Your stories were fun and sexy. Looking forwards to your next installment.
this is the most cleverly put together story that I've ever read. I fully enjoyed the story, I can't wait for chapter 6.
I loved these stories. They're hot, but what about another chapter? Come on!
Are we ever going to get a chapter 6? Just asking. Its stories like this one that made me stick around on this sight.