All Comments on 'Charmed to the Tenth Ch. 05'

ooohhhh!!!!! >:) i wish there was a way i could get an email alert when you update? (i havent been on literotica in ages so i dont know what new stuff they've done.)

This is like all my favorite stories thrown into a blender and pureed. Yay! You (or your story at least) have my undying loyalty. lol.

~Sapphire Fairy~

and send it out. It's got some very quirky twists and turns that I know a lof of publishers would absolutely adore. Let me know!

There is so much of this vision that is overpowering; I am drawn through it. I loved the history of France in the early stages of the war; it is so true to life reality. You must have researched it well. It is beyond Diary.

The general is still a mystery!

Gamby, you have written a powerful chapter with this one, congrats.

I loved it! I now know why you shoud be published. It is a well written story and I couldn't stop reading it. I even missed a World Cup match to finish your story.

Mendon

reading this. couldn't sleep and decided to jest read a few pages of something.

Well, this turned into the whole night. This was excellent, spy, intrigue, supernatural, history, love... So questions questions and forced to wait for the answers. Where's Gail, what happened to the sister? Who is the general, good or bad?

You've done an excellent job creating this story and all these characters and plot directions and in the center is Jeff and Eva. I'd like to hear Jeff described a little. I'd have to go back and look again but I don't think you've written anything about his appearance?

The sex scenes are hot, and the background story is intriguing and very original! But the best thing in the story by far is the tender love story between Eva and Jeff.

I love it!

damn fine story. hope you're planning on finishing this.

If I could vote, I would try to bring your current 4.94 up to a nice, round 5.00. I, and others like me, are still waiting for the next chapters.

I,like the other user am waiting with baited breath for the continuation of this wonderful story. It seems it could be a very, very good story. One of the best I've read here. Please continue with the story. I'll keep you bookmark however long it takes to finish this; you writing and me and others reading. Thank you for sharing with us.