by growing_interest
I like both your writing style and the plot. Hated Chase for being such a sadistic asshole,I hope he gets what he deserves... Waiting for the next chapter :)
You're writing is a cut above the many here on literotica. Not only is the style and content good, but your attention to gramma and spelling is commendable. I feel like I have read something that DOESN'T hack the English language to death for a change. Well done.
I love this story, just started reading this but i like the idea of total control congrats
I wish you and those powers could truly punish all the loser rapists of the world. If he finds another abusive rapist he should just make them be unable to get hard with a member of the oposite sex and never be able to cum, no matter what
This is really, really good, not just as porn but as a story. Please, do continue :)
Great, Great Story! A truly gifted writer. I'm impressed! Can't wait for more chapters and hope you write soon
I really liked the plot although I am not so sure about the whole raping ordeal as it is so sensitive to talk about, look forward to reading the next chapter :)