All Comments on 'Chase Becomes Chaste Ch. 01'

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63lsmith63lsmithover 9 years ago
NOT IMPRESSED

Did not like it at all.Should not be on here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good

I like both your writing style and the plot. Hated Chase for being such a sadistic asshole,I hope he gets what he deserves... Waiting for the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Beautifully Written

You're writing is a cut above the many here on literotica. Not only is the style and content good, but your attention to gramma and spelling is commendable. I feel like I have read something that DOESN'T hack the English language to death for a change. Well done.

FA_JFFA_JFover 9 years ago
Love it!

Rollicking good bad guy gets his just reward. Carry on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great

I love this story, just started reading this but i like the idea of total control congrats

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I love it. The premise and plot are amazing. Keep writing :)

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 7 years ago
Cool

I wish you and those powers could truly punish all the loser rapists of the world. If he finds another abusive rapist he should just make them be unable to get hard with a member of the oposite sex and never be able to cum, no matter what

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 7 years ago

I hope future rapists get similar treatment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This is really, really good, not just as porn but as a story. Please, do continue :)

WMLA44WMLA44about 7 years ago
Great, Great Story! A truly gifted writer. I'm impressed!

Great, Great Story! A truly gifted writer. I'm impressed! Can't wait for more chapters and hope you write soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

I really liked the plot although I am not so sure about the whole raping ordeal as it is so sensitive to talk about, look forward to reading the next chapter :)

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