All Comments on 'Chase Cooder - Bush Pilot! Ch. 03'

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Joe WordsworthJoe Wordsworthover 16 years ago
Niiiiice.

I have a thing for anal stories... so this is really hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sorry, not buying it

No, too haphazard, like a dream all mixed up, four characters becoming one. No lead up to the sex, no emotional connection, it wasn't hot. And the physics doesn't work either. Come on ... Ranger, Delta Force, Surgeon, Lawyer with such a whackey education in three years? No, they sell logic pills somewhere. And there are no perpetual motion electric four wheelers.

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Many moons ago a story took shape and begged to be born. However, the characters took control and the story made a completely unexpected and surprising crossdressing turn...and I went with it. Readers enjoyed it so I did some lather, rinse repeat on the theme and they seemed t...