All Comments on 'Cheating Her Husband'

Who cares.

Too quick to hop on and hop off, but I suppose some like it like that. You really need to proofread a few more times.

From the very TITLE the reader knows she is going to score (fairly reasonable assumption in LW but nonetheless!) Before they arrive at the conference, Sweetie (as narrator) lets us know her marriage is for shit AND she is gunning for her co-worker (just in case those hints are too subtle, they will SHARE a hotel suite. Maybe Indian-subcontinent companies are more relaxed about cutting expenses than European/North American companies!)

Her Laid-Back Bull-to-be suggested dinner, and she then runs with the opening and changes into her Fuck-Me-Quick seduction suit ... then mentions doing the dirty when they get back to the hotel! Plain Vanilla changes to Greek Vanilla with Bull's hint of lotion, then Sweetie's urgent demand! Thanks to the author for Bull wearing a new condom for the Hershey Highway Hike, then removing it for Sweetie's Suck-and-Swallow finale!

3* I love efficiency in coupling in real life. Fiction should have SOME drama somewhere!

Quit writing - buy a dog

As others have said, buy a dog and quit submitting such garbage.

stop faking writing

WAY too obvious and the dialogue is terrible and not remotely believable.

Sweetie's Hubby is irrelevant in this story. This tale would not change to any appreciable degree if she were single/divorced/widowed! LW is interesting because of the tension of -

avoidance of discovery OR

suspicions of Hubby OR

consequences of discovery

(including BTB or separation or Hubby acceptance/participation!)

Better posted in Erotic Coupling!

Plz do not pay attention to Dogs here,keep writing.People are simply jealous

You have created a complex female character that could have carried at least 3 chapters. It is not too late, is it?

so when does the poor hubby find out he is married to a slut

Please write more.

How they continue their affair with more adventures.

मनोज व तुलिकाची ही स्टोरी तर अगदी वंदू व परागसारखीच.

वंदू माझी सुंदर मांसल व संस्कारी बायको जिचा जीव माझा मित्र पराग वर जडला. मला माहित होतं की परागचा लंड ८-९" आहे व वंदू च्या पुच्चीत जाण्यास उतावीळ झाला आहे.

दोघंही एकाच कंपनीत कामाला व वार्षिक काॅन्फरन्सला मुंबईत जायचे होते. मी सहज परवानगी दिली कारण पराग बरोबर आहे. दोघंही कारने जाण्याऐवजी बाईकवर जावे असे मीच सांगितले तीन दिवसांची सुटी मग तिला भरभरून सुख मिळेल.

त्यातून वंदू ने सांगितले की तिचा सेफ पिरीएड‌ चालू आहे तरीही गोळ्यांचे पाकिट बाकी सेक्सी कपड्यांसोबत ठेवले. आणि लोशन पण, गुदमैथुनासाठी.

चार दिवस तीन रात्र पराग व वंदूचा हनीमून रंगला. १५ वेळा निवांत संभोगाने तृप्त झाली ज्यात ५ वेळा गुदमैथुन, ३ वेळा स्तनमैथुन व ५ वेळा मुखमैथुनाचा आनंद त्यांनी लुटला.

ते घरी आले तर वंदूचा चेहरा खुललेला. मी सगळं वर्णन ऐकून वंदूची सर्व भागांची चुंबने घेत चढलो.

बायको भलतीच सेक्सी आहे माझी.