All Comments on 'Chelsea Rising Ch. 03'

Would like to read more !!!

It would be interesting if Chelsea finally carried a baby to term and if Sophia's baby turns up.

Good stuff! Please write more. Maybe a Bec, Chelsea and Ben encounter?

Wonderfully delivered . . . descriptive and evocative, capturing the emotional conflict of two people in love, trying to find their way back to one another . . . a nice job resolving the Sophie dilemma, and better, I think, that you let it resolve without describing what became of her . . . I will definitely go back and read the other two chapters of this story, as well as you other work.

It was good to see them get together at the end. With all of the twists and turns, I was not sure that they would hook up.

I enjoy your writing.

Please continue Ben and Chelsea's story. Perhaps as a couple this time?

the Sophie resolution to the reader to fill in, it was a tangental story line. Great work.

Maybe dealing with Chelsea's pregnancy and her pregnant sex with Ben?

I absolutely love this series and I would like to see more of this, well done mate.

See Ya

Markco_Polo

Definitely continue the series...great stuff!

I think the thing I like best about your stories, are the evolution of the characters. Not just this one but the anonymous series and the stories with susan, david and beth. Chelsea and Ben is an interesting story because you continue to have them change and evolve. I feel like actual time has passed and that the characters are constantly changing as they deal with more problems. Truly spectacular stuff I cant wait for what you write next. Whether its more about Chelsea and ben or two new characters you have in mind I look forward to it.

thanks

I really, really love your serie and I hope that you continue with more chapters.

And that he had gotten hold of the money she had in the bank, etc. but that is just me. Revenge is a biggie to me. I enjoy your writings.

Another great chapter! I'm so glad things worked out for them.

I'm so glad you continued this story. Can't wait to read the next!

Great Story

Thank you,

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

What can better than a love story with two people that love each other & still make errors in judgement. What makes it so good is that they can forgive his transgression and stand by him through good & evil.

The sex was good. They both enjoyed each other's warmth & giving of their souls to one another.

If you write additional chapters, hope that they have children and grow old together, with grandchildren to hold & love.

So glad this all came out in the wash. No more Sophia and no more William I hope.

I really hope that the next chapter has a happy ending as well,this was great and the Sophia part scared me but way to go getting through that and I hope her and William and gone for good and after all that shit they better end up together And happy

I loved the wonderful story and plot, almost a detective/sex/murder mystery! Hehe.

Excited, all the emotions coming out verbally ie: Noooo , yeah !!! Ha Bitch ! and yelling at my (phone).You're a gifted writter. Whew gifted !

This tale has just got better and better, Sophie was a real twist to everything. I'm really looking forward to going straight on to chapter 4 !

I have read all these chapters in a form of novel and I must say it was quite mesmerizing,great character depth,good build up,and the Sophie twist was too a thumbs UP 👍. KEEP WRITING

Regards DK

The part with Sophie blew me away, but you neatly solved that, resolving his relationship with Chelsea too--without it seeming too convenient. You certainly made their sexy steamy and I loved their every union. :) 5

Another superb chapter. Of course, I, imagine like most readers, was depressed that the chapter opens with Chelsea and Ben separated, and further incensed by the fact that the reason for their breakup was because he gave into his weakness and shacked up with that conniving bitch Sophie instead―speaking of whom, while a deplorable character, her fate left me feeling somewhat uneasy. I just want her to know she has been beat and go away, not getting murdered by that Middle Eastern businessman.

Still, it is heartwarming to see that Chelsea and Ben still love each other profoundly during their separation, ditto Chelsea willing to give Ben another chance to rekindle their relationship, hopefully this time their bond becomes even stronger.

I cannot tell you how glad I am to see Ben and Chelsea back together. Bec was a little interlude and Sophie was a witch that showed Ben how good he could have life.

Thank you for giving this work. I enjoyed the characters and the details you used like Sophy's voice and Chelsea's humor (the skillet). I hope you keep writing and make public where your work is if not here.

I enjoyed this segment as I did the others. The sections on Sophie read like a suspenseful detective story. And who says Literotica can't be literate. I choose my authors carefully and eschew those who write little more than pages and pages of sexual escapades ad nauseam. Happily you are definitely not among them.

EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! CANT YOU KEEP GOING PLEASE?

Loved it, was a bit disappointed at the new direction u took but you brought it all back together so that our hero’s are together again, where they belong.

Lovely story.

Wow!!! You really put them through their paces and I was afraid that they would never find each other again but they finally did so the wait was definitely worth it. One of the best stories I have read in quite some time!!!

Excellent

I didn't see that twist coming but I enjoyed the read. Well done. Thank you for your writing