All Comments on 'Cherry's Cherry'

man, i did a crap job on that one. But, hey, it's only porn right.

This guys cheating! He's voting for his own crap. Must be

a Republican!.

Grab a dictionary mate and look up the meaning of 'fill' and 'feel'.

I am kind of a *Mechanic* - with words - and I might say you got the wrong approach with your *story - telling*... Your story sounds like a trade - union representative report on a work accident, while all we speak here is about highly sexual emotions...

Bref, my advice here is to enlarge your vocabulary - and read more *love stories* before you write another of your own - OK ?