All Comments on 'Chez Fiona Ch. 02'

This is one of the better incest stories this year, good job, you've just been bookmarked. Please keep it up.

Absolutely the hottest story in this category in *ages*, if not EVER. I can't believe you're not actually a woman, you write from Fiona's perspective so well!

Very well written and with a touch of realism.... those are the best kind of stories. Well done.

It was a great story,an well written,

what i really liked was the way u showed the build up to the seduction and ue fantasies.

Awating to read the continuation.

thanx

...all the anonymous horse shit critiques. Part of being a member of this site, at least to me, is having the balls to go on the fucking record. Some friends of mine and a few family members know I frequent this site. Shocked? Yeah, some were, but...they got over it! LOL! I am who I am. I don't hurt others and I expect the same treatment. And...I love erotica. I am NOT ashamed, and never will be. This story rocks! It's dirty, and nasty, and hornier than fire. Great job so far fog...

I agree with previous comments. Good, realistic build up showing the conflicting emotions of lasciviousness and social conservatism. I'm glad the former won out. Look forward to many more nasty adventures.

Really hot. And I love the cum play and the external cumshots. I don't get why so many stories have just internal pop shots, when having the men douse the women with huge loads is so hot.

This is one hot Mom you've drawn. I look forward to the rest of your tale.