All Comments on 'Chicago Hotel Adventure Ch. 04'

So complete, with a good story, fine writing AND hot sex. Thank you for sharing. I'm dripping with anticipation for the next installment.

it was fantastic. well done.

I loved it period. Please, I beg you, write more.

Another fantastic chapter to the best story on Lit. Thanks for continuing the tale! I look forward to your next piece of work!

Great story, hope you write more chapters of it. I found the storyline the best part of this, pretty unusual for these types of stories.

that waz muchala awesome

Vivid imagination, descriptions and well paced, work of a truly gifted writer. Best I ever read (and I've been reading for over 8 years) on any website. I have your submissions page bookmarked (and only yours). Looking forward to many more submissions from you. Hope you continue to contribute to this website. Thank you for sharing your work with us plebes! :-)

I am so horny now I could jump any man that walked thorugh my door. Just can't wait. Keep 'em coming. In more ways than one.

That was that best story I think I have ever read. Thank You

this story was amazing i find myself thinking about it all the timeeee absolutly the best story i have ever read and ever will read

Out of hundreds of pieces I have read here, this is easily the most inspired masterpiece I have ever come across. Congradulate yourself, you have earned it.

I am very sparing with my praise, but I have to honestly say that up to this point, this series is the best story on Literotica, bar none.

Not only is the sexual writing excellent, but the story and characters are absolutely captivating. The way that their love is portrayed through music is an amazing addition, and really adds depth to the story.

This was by far the best writing I have read in a long time. Not only is it wildly erotic, the story and plot and even the timing of the story is perfect. This is by far the best erotic story I have ever read, and fast becoming my favorite series of any kind.

I have never commented... 1000s of stories read over 7 or 8 years. This is the best. Congratulations!

woaw!.... its also my first comment in this site, although i read quite a lot of the stories...

and .. my boyfriend will be coming tomorrow afternoon... how i wish he was here right now

This story has real emotion. Reminds me of how I feel about my future wife. She pointed it out to me, and i had to completely read it. We are writing a story together and this one is great inspiration.

No offense to the author, it's not a horrible story, but it is NOT well-written so I think all the comments praising it as the best story they've ever read are B.S. This story should definitely NOT be ranked as high as it is (could be in the 3's, not above a 4!), so I think someone has been cheating and manipulating the scores somehow to inflate it. Which is sad. Have more confidence in yourself based on reality. If you have to cheat, why do it? What is the benefit to you? You know it's not real, and I don't think you get paid for it, so why bother. You just wasted my time. :(

This is a beautiful story. It's romantic and sexy and reminds me of the time I fell hard for the most loving stud I had ever bedded. All the high ratings are well-deserved, I've read all five parts multiple times now.

Great so far ....

I like it 5 Stars worth but it’s not the best ever. As to the pool sex I doubt the author has tried it. When we first got our in-ground cement pond just for the heck of it I cranked up the heater to 95* hot & wife & I proceeded to christen it. It’s fun until I got in a little sideways opening her vagina up to the pool water. 95* pool water is ice cold compared to the inside of a vagina.

That was our first & last fuck in the pool. 😆

Otherwise the tale is consistently good.

Bill S.