by M J Lindsay
I like to both read and write a lot of different types of erotic fiction. I especially like lesbian fiction that portrays lesbians as real people. Thanks for an enjoyable and ultimately satisfying read :)
As a lesbian it is always great to read stories that are not just about girl on girl action, of coure the sex is always wonderful to read about but what makes it even better is the depth of honest emotion and actual storyline that you breathed into it. Thank you for writing a story that lesbians can be proud to read.
That really was a truely beautiful story, I love the way the emotions build up to the climax (no pun intended), it adds a whole dimension on top of the stories that dive right in (sorry)
You're absolutely right -- without the heart, it's JUST sex.
Beautiful story, wonderful characters, tantalizing build-up, and well-written. Excellent!
REALLY looking forward to reading more of your work! Do you have anything on the burner?!
Happy writing!
What makes an erotica story interesting is not how hot the sex is but the depth of the feelings. And that's what a lot of writers lack but not you. :)
This story was perfect! Full of detail, emotion, and passion. I really enjoyed it! Keep writing more stories!
Ooooh, the characters here are just bursting with heat and attraction for each other, yet they're so independent that it really is a miracle they ever met. XD I loved the story, especially the whole intimate exploration cut short and agreed upon. Their jobs were amazing, too, and it really expressed what they meant to each other. Awesome, fantastic job!! XD
Loved this story. Showed how two can find one another and fall in love.
Like you, I love romance before the sex. You tick all the boxes!! You have an amazing talent.
I love connections between people that are more than physical. This was lovely.
I love connections between people that are more than physical. This was lovely.