by happyday
We want more Story to good not to continue with chapter 3 and hopefully 4
Somewhere in this tale and its first chapter is a decent story struggling to get out. As it is, it's a bit too abrupt. Try working at it, see if you can expand it. It might well be worth the effort.
I agree with everyone else!!!! YOUR TEASING!!!! Skip dinner, make a light snack, and get to the good stuff!!!!! This story is amazing!
...this story definitely needs a continuation. it's just developing. there's so much potential. please continue it.
You have to give us more on this one please. I want to hear what happens next........you teaser!!!!!!
and I bet you are loving it. Give us more, we need more. Skip the dinner, you have plenty of nourishment there to go on for awhile.
I think you are a tease.....and I 'm loving it !
Please don't make it a long meal, but give them a bottle of good wine, they deserve it.