All Comments on 'Chocolate Kisses Ch. 12'

Fine story and series, glad that there will be more.

Wonderful story, and the sequel should be very interesting as well.

Five stars, of course.

Thank goodness for another chapter. This is another examle of a great author. Love it,Love it,Love it,Thank You calibeachgirl !

Makes me feel all tingly inside.Well written.!!!!!!!

on Literotica that manages to get Clarence Darrow into the mix gets a 5-star rating from me!

I cannot wait to see their story continue. These are people that are firmly rooted in my head and I can't forget! 5 stars easily.

I just loved this story. The only thing that keeps me from being sad is the thought that it will continue with "Pearl" Please don't keep us waiting too very long. Excellent work!

I just love the storytelling pace you have established from the very beginning and the realistic sex that fits so well with the fascinating storyline.Five stars (again) from me :)

this story rocked, i loved it so much i spent the last 3 hours reading from chapter 4 to 12, be quick with the update please!!!!

I am looking forward to the next chapters of "Pearl". Extremely well written and fast moving. Thank you for all your efforts....

I really enjoyed this story it was great now gonna start reading the next part thanks keep up the great writing!!

The perfect way to end this beautiful story... I will read the next part!!!!

This is just a hot, sweet love story. I've enjoyed every bit of it.

I love the historical setting of this story, it makes them falling in love so much sweeter because of the difficulties that came along with it. Just a sucker for romance and overcoming the odds!

The first chapter was strong, solid, somewhat logical... but then the story became aimless, nonsensical, contradictory... as if the author changed the plot midstream or it was taken over by a different writer altogether. For example, James' private thoughts revealed he was determined to find the real killers but several chapters later, he says the suspects were the real killers. H never went into detail with h about his past but continually foisted Catherine's clothes on her. The strange H/Eliza dynamic, where H felt he had to 'be there for her as well.' There was no explanation as to why GA decided not to go through with the 'marriage' then three days later, all was well.

Initially, the story had a noir type feel. I thought the H/h were going to be amateur sleuths, experiencing all the obstacles of an IR couple, having great sex while tracking down the murderers and a connection, if any, to why the store was loosing money.

Great series. Thanks for your time and imagination.