All Comments on 'Choices and Consequences Ch. 01'

I just came across this story and I have to say that it is just fantastic! I was immediately drawn right in only after reading the first few lines. Great characters! I already feel like I 'know' them and the story line is awesome! I cannot wait for the next parts that will be coming to follow! Thank you! Great writing!

I need more!!! This story was amazing! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue! I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!!

pls continue the story... love it

Great start. Looking forward to next episode.

The only hing I saw wrong was that at one point you mention that she is about to get married, and then in another you make it sound like she is.

You have a great beginning here and can't wait for the next post

but I don't get it. Her parents treat her like a servant, they don't support her in any way, she is self sufficient mentally and financialy, why the hell does she continue to put up with it? Her legs broken? She should just walk away from the assholes.

Nice. reminds me of fanfiction, though. :D

I'm enjoying this. It's a little like a glimpse into life as I DON'T know it. Very enjoyable.