All Comments on 'Choices Ch. 01'

Good start. I want to see where you take this.

you put this in the wrong category. Loving Wives is more like it. Romantic, it's not.

at least be true to your-self (ones-self) TK U MLJ LV NV

loved the new story and the writing of it .

can't wait to read whats going to take place with the two brothers

and Terri the wife ., I love these arm chair critic. that want to , stay Anonymous . lacking the back bone to put an address so the author, can reply. seeing you have only been on but two months. and all of sudden your

a critic of some one thats has written quite a few stories. were you it seem have written none. if your going to slag some one down about the story they wrote

get a back bone and some courage leave an Email address.

once again I for one love the story well done you. wanting to read the next part .

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Especially like the juxtaposed stories of the wife and husband cheating on each other. Like trains heading for each other on one track. I was impressed enough to check your bio and past stories. You are prolific, take your writing seriously. I will read the rest of your stories. Looking forward to chapter 2. (Ignore the haters who comment.)

Wrong category, Loving Wives. Not a very good one either.

I think your story is great and I can't wait to read more! I can see it being a romance, not just loving wives. Looking forward to ch. 2!!!

One would think the wrong catagory comment doesn't need to be repeated constantly.

I love the double plot, the characters have great potential for growth. I like the theme.

Apparently romance can only be found if you follow certain rules according to mass mentality...lol (sarcasm for those who can't read tone.)

purely opinion on the actual writing, it seemed a bit like I was having the situation explained to me rather than watching the characters act it out. That may have been the intent. It isn't a deal breaker by any means, and I am still going to watch for the rest. Definitely think you should keep at and thank your friend for encouraging you again!

I thought it was more realistic than most want to.admit. And if you have a problem with sex outside a relationship or marriage...what in the world are you doing here? Lol Don't pay attention to uppity closet freaks. The writing and story are good. :)

One more story with somebody's help. But nevertheless it is good. Must show some more variety of sex.

You have a great story line here--keep it going!

And ignore the comments about wrong category. What difference does that make?

It should be read, and appreciated, for what it is-- a well written piece of erotic fiction--not panned because it doesn't fit a certain category.

Okay; four-star (only because of editing errors; a "9" if it were a scale of "10")

Fascinating plot. Convoluted, but then, Life has a way of being that way. There are multiple issues to resolve, and for someone, it's not likely to be a happy ending.

Chapter 2 is posted.......and I have some reading to do.

Lying cheating cunt only interested in cock size - if she want such a whore she would tell husband that it is over.

Very good storytelling! A little tumbling and rough in some transitions and interchanges, but a good plot with good characterizations. Looking forward to Chapter two.....and three, let's hope?

Real crazy mixed up family I guess that is what makes it a good read, Thanks for sharing.

What right does Tom and Terri have to act all after fucking? This whole story seems like a cluster fuck.

A tale of cheating assholes. All cheaters should suffer in extreme pain.

turns into family dilemma. TK U MLJ LV NV

What a family....All cheaters...

On both sides of my family, I have witnessed several similar events to this one. I, for one, am looking forward to the next chapter. Some grammatical errors...not important. But something you might want to double check.

Minus 5*!!!B93C

You want the people reading this to believe what you have written? Then get off whatever you have been smoking and read what you have written....6 months on the road and never been home. lol ...you have no grip on reality...go back to the non-human shit.

A group of cheetos idiots. Who gives a shit about anyone in your story?

Another shitty story about vile human beings

I'm not reading part 2,3, or anything else. The only one I feel sorry for is the mother of the 2 imbiciles of sons & a slutty daughteri -in-law. They're all cheaters. If there's any end result, they should all be forced to live together in a 1-BRm apartments on the outskirts of town. 1 star Bob

You have the bones of a good story, but the details need some attention. I’m looking forward to seeing how things progress.

This was terrible. Poor writing and storyline.