All Comments on 'Choices Ch. 11'

was not quite up to your usual superb level. Nan was not in character with her actions and the rest of the story was just a tad too condensed. That being said, you are still one of my favorites. Hopefully you will do another cheating wife tale soon.

with the other poster that the ending was abrupt. It seemed way too easy. But all things considered, it was a good novel. Thanks for sharing your talent, and keep on writing!

ending was not what I was expecting - nice anyways

Such a great love story that emerged from such a great loss. Well written, just enough drama to keep it interesting and with happily ever after at the end was great, but the end I will have to agree was a bit rushed, the epilogue should of been more drawn out with more detail about their their new life together. Well done 5++stars

The main character made the right choice. Good story.

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