All Comments on 'Choosing Corner Time'

by RoseWilder

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BahamaBahamaalmost 12 years ago
Damn Sam

That was awesome! More please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very well done!

A marvellous, unusually-structured and thoroughly delightful story. Thank you for bringing it to us - five stars; please don't let it be THE END - it has so much potential.

suppleWritersuppleWriteralmost 12 years ago
Erotic, loving

Great story! I especially liked the part where the sub asks if she may count her smacks.

beautifully_submissivebeautifully_submissivealmost 12 years ago
More!

I really liked the flow of this piece, and want to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Loved the style

I loved the dialogue and the style. It lets you imagine what's going on in between *your way*, and for someone who is primarily interested in D/s more than S/M, the dialogue is really the meat of it. Excellent work.

One thing bothered me: The submissive in the story is manipulative and keeps trying to top from the bottom, which is kind of a turn off. I understand someone kneeling in the corner and waiting for her Mistress when she knows she did something wrong, but putting on nipple clamps, and then repeatedly asking to be punished and spanked... that's a bit too visibly self-centered and manipulative...

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