All Comments on 'Chris Carter's Luck Ch. 01'

What a lovely story. I do hope you will write more about these two lovers. I found myself wanting more at the end, and that is the hallmark of a great story.

I loved this story! It was surprisingly believeable and made me feel hot down there if you know what I mean *wink*!

Please carry on as I really want to know what happens next.

make it erotic couplings and it fits. 3 stars

Wrong category that’s for sure. The storyline would’ve been a lot more believable if you had him fucking her after five minutes instead of five seconds after meeting her....l know us Australian men are pretty quick at bedding women but that was ridicules. At least I got a good laugh out of it...⭐️⭐️⭐️ .

Good, straightforward, story...