All Comments on 'Chris’ Hard Choices Ch. 04'

I just really like the way this is going, please keep it up.

Like the story line. Would like to get into the heads of the characters a little more, but its a great read. Can't wait for the next chapter.

great story, can't wait for more

Best story on literotica!! Keep it coming! The possibilities are endless on where this could go! I haven't ever commented before but this deserved it!

I, too, would like to see more of this series, and/or perhaps a spin-off with Denise playing the Domme to Angela and some of the other ladies who 'cum' to service Chris.

You can't stop there gettin right into it wens the next chapter cumming maybe yu cud bring that Physiotherapist back into it

I wish it was me getting fucked by that dude... I love getting fucked by handicapped men...

I love your stories but they seem to be unfinished. Would love to read the rest.

GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY! Please write more about Chris and all of his many lovers!

Please continue the story. You haven't cycled all the nurses through the since Chris came home. And the reveal about his Dr. and their baby. So many more possibilities! Please continue the story, I have enjoyed it immensely so far.

great story-good characters-hot sex-nicely written

I decided not to write a comment in chapter 3 until I had read this one before making any further comments. I have enjoyed it so far but for the fact that it now seems to be dangling in the breeze here in this chapter unless you are planing on writing a few more chapters on the story which I hope you are doing. I so hope you are going to be doing that and hoping with baited breath that a few of the Ladies involved are going to end up with a belly full of arms & legs if you know what I mean, so here's hoping until next time cheerio mate.

more more

Please write more. It is not good to leave a story half done

The story is alright but is lacking in certain areas. From the start, the women in his life weren't very careful about his supposedly fractured neck (straddling him etc) and he didn't seem to have any neck pains whenever he was looking around and such. You got rid of his broken wrists and pain too early, it's only been 3 weeks or so. Finally, and this last one makes absolutely NO sense: they manage to get him home relatively early from the hospital, in large part due to his aunt Lea who was an RN. Yet despite this, his mother and aunt have to leave for work? Umm.... no? Not only would the mother at the least have had work off, (and would've refused to go in had they asked) but if the aunt is the reason he got to go home early then she wouldn't have been working either, as this would've been her "work" on a temporary basis. It was a sad excuse just to add another sex scene with yet another woman in his life. She could've been added later or with a better excuse than what you gave, though overall it seemed you were getting rather carried away with the amount of women in the story around the mc. Either way it doesn't look like you plan to finish the story.

One of the best I've read yet of 4 chapters that is as good as it gets. Great imaginations at work here! Keep it coming!!!😎

Make Chris put Denise in her place have him become dominant

There are simply too many women involved in the 4 chapters. So why stop there? Why not a female director of the hospital, the cafeteria director/chef, head of housekeeping, director of finance, etc. but why limit the actions to the hospital? Why not all of his adult female family members, all adult acquaintances of he, his mother and aunt or possibly a female mayor and all of the females on city council? Even those of the $3 community would have tried to participate. Get my point? Be sensible.

If he were endowed as well as your writing suggests, knowledge would have disseminated all across the city even before the accident.

I like what you have done. You have left it open for more possibilities. Keep it up.

mmmmmmmmmmore pkease

I hope you write part 5 to finish this story.

this series is amazing cant wait for chapter 5, im hooked 5 stars

I really love this story I wish you could continue it

I would love to see if the doctor an nurse pregnant plus mom and neighbor wife an aunt might pregnant was well can't wait for chapter five was well

Awesome but you need to continue and see where this goes!! Does he get better and play at Alabama? How many women become pregnant? Gave it all 5 STARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Enjoyable,light-hearted incestuus love story.