All Comments on 'Christina's Seduction'

Hi:

You are a good writer. I just read all three of your stories, and they were good. But I would like you to do one where the relationship turns into love, and lasts at least for awhile. I have been in relationships with women, some married. They all lasted more than one night. None were lesbians, they were all bi.

look forward to more from you.

Thanks for sharing your experiences. In the hands of a lesser writer, they would not be nearly as enjoyable to read. For our sake, I hope you have further lesbian encounters.

Thanks for a sweet, wonderful story

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Let me just say that you are one of my Top 3 favorite writers on literotica. I just read all three of your stories and each of them were exceptional. I work in

journalism and can appreciate good writing and thats just what yours is.

But what really sets your stories apart is that they are true, which creates another level of fantasy with me.

In your first story in particular, you really create this sense of intrigue and taboo with your bi-curious nature. I also am entertained with the London setting, I've traveled to the UK and you recreate the atmosphere and social

setting perfectly.

Thanks again for your writing. Let me also say that the women in your stories (including yourself) all sound like utter gems of sexual energy. I am always

attracted to the more curvy members of the opposite sex, so this turned me on even more.

I'm looking forward to your next story, thanks again.

keep up the good work made my cock hard

An amazing story of love and compassion and erotic pleasure. Very well written, it flows and moves in a natural way that shows your interest and passions for the story and the young girl. Very well done indeed.

EVERY YOUNG PERSON SHOULD BE SO LUCKY AS TOO HAVE A SWEET & CAREING INTRODUCTION TOO SEX & FRIENDSHIP !!!

I really love your story. I think is one of the best, here in Lit,.... so tender, so soft. You are an excellent author.

Thank you smallncute ... the sensativity, the responses, feelings of each person were true to life. Once again, Great Job! and I look forward to reading your next story.

feel like i was there! wish i could move into your building and have a neighbour like you.

You have a wonderful way of capturing how things really are (although as a mere man I'm speaking in general.) Looking forward to reading more of your writing, and still waiting to summon up courage to post some of my own.

What more can I say? Well written, sensual, going through the whole seduction to the most beautiful conclusion. Well done, and let's see more like this!

The cold shower did nothing to inhibit my feelings as I read the third of three stories. You have the ability to make words into vision. I shuddered when the two of you came together with gentle passion. Micki

it was so nice to see you in lit chat today as it reminded me of your stories, so i dropped in on my way out and refreshed my memory. hope to see you in chat soon and maybe get on the waiting list to talk with you. kisses

rita ( bimomfromFla )

You have a wonderful talent and imagination ... i look forward to more...

Green

Hello Miranda, Christina's seduction was like a reflection of my dreams and those fantasies deep inside of me. Thanks for writing this particular story, thanks for sharing it with me :)

Hugs, Sweet_Gurl.

your magnificent, well written and very erotic stories bring home the fact that the initiation of sex between women is to totally different than men. as a bi man, i can think of so many cock touching, reaction, then response between men at gay bars, pornio theatres,public toilets, floowed occasionally by hard, lip hurting kisses, then quickly a cock sucked. nothing pretty, gross, ugly, tawdry...nut...so fucking hot, made evev better if you never see each other again.

Miranda between reading your stories and chatting with you in the chatroom I feel like flying to London. All I need is an airline with an ample supply of towels for me to sit on. You leave me wanting.

i loved the gentleness of this story which, combined with it's simplicity, made for a very enjoyable reading experiance... I enjoyed the Christina character and like her naivity and inexperiance... suducing a younger woman like this is a fantasy of mine too... thanks Miranda i really enjoyed it xx

Like I said in my private comment, this is your best story, at least so far. I love how you seduce Christina so gently; I could help but play with myself as you went on.

Nothing sweeter than seduction

A wonderful piece of writing. This is the first story of yours I've read & it is beautiful. Such a soft & gentle seduction, & so eloquently written.

Thank you for sharing. :o)

fallen_angel x

MIRANDA MY FIRST READING OF UR STORIES..THIS WAS SO RENDER AND SENSUOUS I BECAME QUITE AROUSED GIGGLE PLEASE KEEP IT UP LITH

Miranda, sensuous,stimulating and so beautifully written. I envy your talent and your good fortune, look forward to reading your other work soon and maybe speak to you in the room, thanks,Rob

Both erotic and moving simultaneously!

Hi :) Such a wonderful story and very well written. I'll admit it got me a little excited just thinking about it...imagining myself as Christina. Did I really write that on a public message board? eeek!

I enjoyed talking to you the other day too! I do so hope we meet again.

Erica

This was the first of your the stories I have read. Just picked from the list. Wow glad I did. Awesome. Kiwi

Loved the story, really got me going and the imagery was wonderful.

Quite sweet and the intimacy (sexual and friendship) was just lovely. Enjoyable for both my wife and I.

Perhaps someday you'll try your hand at the novel catagory. We believe something along these lines only expanded would be amazing to behold.

...another erotic story, with flaws but written with passion and flare for a loving yet erotic tale. I sometimes want to read more about the feelings than the anatomical action and fact, but maybe this is my prejudice and I know sometimes when I am writing the physical is manifested above all else. Also, just an observation, you stated that she cut the thong so as 'not to disturb her'. Would that not inflame her further? Either because she found the sliding of a dangerous knife or scissors between her hot flesh and the taut band of her panties erotic OR because she had paid mega-bucks for a pair of Lejaby thongs and would be incensed by how much they cost and were now being wasted?! either way, I think she WOULD be disturbed.

though the end seemed rushed - would have loved more, with xchristinas returning the favour detailed

Very vivid, realistic and beautifully told story. Yes it's sexy and sensual but your descriptions of love-making (that's what I read it as ) are beautiful almost moving.

You used that non-standard word three times in the first three paragraphs. That's when I stopped reading.

I love reading these histories... I must be a voyeur as I enjoy very much hearing of peoples' experiences and their inner thoughts. The scenes here are realistic and gentle while quite hot!

Anon 10/30/13 should go suck an egg and realize that not everyone reading and writing lit is from USA. If your delicate eyes can't handle seeing a word uncommon to you a couple times you should go read fiction somewhere like Disney.com instead.

one of the most graphic encounters i've read ..enjoyed