All Comments on 'Christmas Blessings'

Fantastic story i like the way you write and think thank you

I have read this story three times and everytime I read it it gets better. I guess I am just a hopeless romantic who loves a good story with a happy ending. Speaking of happy endings, you will be in my prayers for a full recovery from your recent health issues. God Bless You.

ONE OF THE BEST CHRISTMAS STORIES THAT I HAVE READ IF NOT THE BEST. SO MUCH FEELING SO MUCH LOVE. 5 STARS PLUS

Every good story should have one and your story sure does. Thank you.

In a word, a wonderful story, well written, very well crafted.

IT ONLY TAKES A MINUTE HOUR OR DAY TO FALL IN LOVE. CARLIE WAS SENT TO NATHAN SO THAT THEY COULD BE TOGETHER. THE WRONG TURN IN THE ROAD THE DECISION TO WALK THE DIRECTION SHE DID WAS ORDAINED BY FATE AND NATHANS DEAD WIFE{ AN ANGEL SENT FROM ABOVE}. SHEWANTED NATHAN AND HER CHILDREN TO BE LOVED AND HAPPY AND TAKEN CARE OF UNTIL HE CAME TO HEAVEN SO THEY COULD BE TOGETHER AGAIN THAT IS WHAT DARA WANTED ALSO. THE CHILDREN KNEW THAT SHE WAS GOING TO BE THERE NEW MOMMY THERE MOTHER TOLD THEM SO. A GREAT LOVING STORY THAT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES AND HAVE READ MANY TIMES. I DO HOPE THAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN A SEQUEL ABOUT DARA(CARLIE) NATHAN AND THERE WONDERFUL CHILDREN. 15 STARS PLUS SO VERY WELL WRITTEN . THE SCENE IN THE CHURCH STARTED TO GET TO ME BECAUSE I WAS AFRAID DARA HAD PASSED ON GIVING BIRTH . IT WAS HEART WARMING TO KNOW THAT IT WAS THE CELEBERATION OF THERE NEW SON. YOU COULD HAVE TOPPED IT OFF BY IT BEING A GIRL NAMED{CARLIE KENDRA}. AN OVER THE TOP STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE ABOUT NATHAN,DARA{CARLIE AND THE CHILDREN.}

RON

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One of the best, if not THE best I have read. Almost stopped reading it when you did the scene change to the church after the baby was born. Was furious at the thought of Dara having died. Then SUCKERED, pretty good trick. Made the heart swell and the eyes tear. Keep up the outstanding writing.

To expand on the comment by Rightbank. The baby should have been a girl and named Carlie Kendra Carter. After all every one of them had been visited by Angel Kendra and given her blessing.

I also like the “Hallmark Christmas Special” comment. I would most definitely watch it.

but I have to ask a question that has been bugging me.

If he had a working snow machine, and the snow had stopped enough that they could build a snowman and go off to the woods and get a Christmas tree. Why didn't he take a short ride in the other direction to contact the authorities and get medical help instead of baking cookies?

should have been a girl,

named Carlli

I love your story. It has compassion and cheer and all the elements of a Christmas story. However you said the doctor came out cleaning his blood covered hands??? Did he perform the hysterectomy barehanded? Chuckles. Aside from that...perfectly written.

I enjoyed the story except for one bit: Nathan goes from feeling guilty about having sexual feelings for anyone other than his deceased wife to suddenly wanting to marry a woman who doesn't even know her own identity in, what, two days?

An absolutely great story. I could feel the love that the family shared.

I was getting depressed as I was reading the ending, I thought for sure she was going to die. I was so glad that she lived and that you tricked me. A true feel good story. Thank You

A real classical tale, with highs & lows and a happy end.

Thank you

HP

Everything built up to the happy ending and you had to pull the rug out from under us. You just couldn't leave well enough alone, you couldn't be content with everything you foreshadowed? what the f@#$%ck is wrong with a happy ending????? you destroyed a perfectly good story!

this should be a Hallmark Christmas Special ... DKP

This was so moving liked the trick with the church had me going

This is a beautiful and moving story

Please keep writing. You have a gift and we all need dreams. Thanks

I could not stop reading. This should be a movie!

What a jet-fueled, over-caffeinated, supercharged roller coaster ride! I spent most of the read trying to hide tears from my SO across the room, and my heart damn near fell through the floor when the baby was born and christened. Not curves as some have called them, but major kinks of kinds directional, not sexual.

This is a fantastic story. I can't wait to see if there's more.

His sudden proposal to an amnesiac woman he'd known for a handful of days was pretty immersion-breaking. It just seemed so sudden and didn't seem realistic to me.

I have read this several times and it never fails to bring tears. Is as good this time as it was the first time I read it.

Congratulations!!

Holy crap. The twist near the end almost gave me a heart attack. Job well done. One of my favorites here. Keep up the good work!

My heart was in my mouth, i thought he had lost another wife when he was left with the baby.

So glad he wasnt.

Beautiful story

After a second reading, I loved this story even more. If this is any indication of your writing skills, I know why you have moved on to the published world.

The story struck so many ways emotionally-happy-sad-frightened-unsure and weeping among others. Thank you for writing such a wonderful and emotional story.

Bless You!!!

I loved it the first time I read it, and that decision hasn't changed over time. Just read it again - absolutely stunning work from a truly great author.

Wonderful story. Thank you. :)

story! This is the 2nd of your stories I've read. Both are well done. I will try a few more, and I seldom do that.

Danielle that was absolutely one of the best stories I have read in a very long time... I will admit that you scared the daylights out of me when Dara ran into trouble after the birth and at the start of the church scene I was seriously thinking "OH NO NOT AGAIN!!!!" Glad all worked out in the end.

You belong in the same class as a few other writers here that I really like, romantic1, oldhippie1949 and moogplayer, This was the first of your stories I hae read and will read more.

One problem though, I can't give you10 stars even though this story deserves them...

what a beautiful story. keep up with your great talentive writing.

I almost punched my monitor when she passed out and then they were at a church with solemn music. Extremely well done.

Five stars for your good story! It was so good. Feliz Navidad a un autor muy talentoso.

I don't think I've laughed and cried at the same time ever...Thanks it was great.

A wonderful story

Thx

a beautiful story which nearly made me cry

This is one of those feel good stories. Thank you for sharing this gem!!!!!!!!

Such a wonderful story,made all the wandering thru trash worth it, Again THANK YOU.

Great story one of the best I've ever read than

B9aak you for writing it

I loved reading every well written word. Are you sure you aren't Nora Roberts?

story, storyline, style and content, and well edited. Very well done!

Danielle,

You displayed your creative wordsmith talent, positive outlook, and sense of emotional connections in this lovely Christmas tale. The father/children connection, new and building romance between Nathan and Dara, as well as the continuing connection between Nathan and his first wife were delightful ! Thanks very much! Gift us with more fine tales when you get a chance please! Good luck in finding that house! Dan

One of the best romance stories i've read. excellent work

Outstanding!!

One of the best stories in this site. There's so much to love in this story. Glad to see that not only is he happy, but his children are too. They've now found a new mom to love.

Even though not the typical erotic story, I still loved it. Keep up the good work.

I'm tempted to say that this is pretty tame for an 'erotica' site, but I don't want to take away from the fact that it's an exquisitely well-crafted story, and delightfully touching.

a whole bunch. Skip the glitches, read the story as a story. It's a great one.

Brilliant story. well written.

This is a great story. It made me laugh and cry.

I love this story. From start to finish, I never read a story here on literotica so moving. I was laughing and crying. This story is what happens in real life.

This is the most moving that I have read on literotica. You should write more like this. It is uplifting and gives Hope and Faith. Thank you.

This has to be the best romantic short story that I have EVER read. I love christmas romance stories, and this is the BEST. 5***** toby9790.

One of the best stories in this site. So moving and touching. Made my eyes water ;-). You should write more stories like this.

I've read lots and lots. This moved me in ways that I can't describe. A wonderful story. Truly wonderful your my new favorite author. And my first lol.

This is my second or third read of this story. It still brings a few tears to my eyes. It is one of the best I've read here on Lit. Thanks!!

This was amazing. The best I have read. Keep writing

This is the third time I have read this story, and I enjoy reading it more each time. The emotion of love lost and then found again. You did a great job and are one of my favorite authors here on literotica.

And yes for the third time, I had tears in my eye's so much for being a big strong fella.

Doug

Other have said but it was wonderful. Although I am sure some flamer will post that you were sloppy because the character's name in mid-story.

This was, by far, the most beautiful story I have ever read on this site. I was crying through a good deal of it. Thank you!

When painful emotions that have been deeply buried for years are pulled forth by a story, when the tears keep coming even after the last page is read, then true healing becomes possible.

Thank you for providing this opportunity to finally release grief long supressed. Yes, it hurts when the protective numbness fades yet just maybe I can start to live again rather than continuing mere existence.

Thank you so much for sharing this story. The depth of pain in loss, and the height of joy in healing and new love, remind me to expand my comfort zone. I so appreciate your gift to me.

I loved the great story. However, the North Star isn't even close to being the brightest star in the sky.

... sighed when it was over, wishing it wasn't done yet, knowing that it was complete ... you are such an excellent author. I'm looking forward to reading more of your submissions. [Gualterio]

A skillfully crafted work. And, by someone that understands the difference between taut and taunt! Please continue writing, you understand emotions are what drive us!

Tears of Joy, Tears of Saddness, and tears of a love lost and a love found. Thank you for writing this and letting all of us read what you have created. This has touched me in many ways.

I loved this story, thanks for writing it. Great ending.

I truely enjoy how you write. I was tearing up every page or two about something, then I thought the story was winding down when she had the baby and then oh no she is dying. The next scene was the family at the church where I thought for sure Dara had passed away. That was a very mean trick. :o)

I loved this story.

Your writing reaches out and touches ones heart, something all to rare these days. Thanks and please keep writing, i looking forward to reading some of your other stories

True Love,i cry every timi I read this happy but still sad,I love it and pyay to read it in Cecenber when both my Wife and I will be 80!dLove

I've read this one several times. I'm sure I'll read it again. Thanks for putting it back out there for us to enjoy.

when i read to the last page, and she got sick, I was about to throw my computer! but she is still alive... such a good story...Ive got tears :)

I'm glad you reposted this story, Daniellekitten. I always get a good feeling when I read it.

Hope all is well with you.

I like the romantic types. Good tale well told. Thanks and keep good stories like this comming.

ya man im just 15and i found this story so beautiful it almost made cry however i didnt only titanic can do that anyway the main point is that if u hate romance then dont read this story and badmouth it and incase u havent notice love is different from sex

Mate, if you can't handle romance and want a quick fuck, what are you doing on the romance thread? go elsewhere and keep your nasty comments to yourself. this was a wonderful story!

This was certainly one of the best stories I have ever read. I am still crying as I type this, what a beautiful story!

this is a love story with almost no sex that does more to warm the heart than anything i have seen in awhile, and the guy with the turd comment coal for life

that I will demand that Santa leave a big smelly turd in your stocking on the 24th. I have to empty the puke bucket twice on this one, and I can usually handle crap like this pretty well. We are all so delighted that so many emails requested that you rerun this story. If you hadn't made that up, I'd ask for the list so we could have some more stocking stuffers ordered up for those folks as well.

Oh my goodness...who would have thought that there could be such a great story on Literotica.com!! Until now, I have always read just plain Erotica...now I'll definately be looking out for more stories!! More more more!!! I loved this story! Was long but kept me reading as I lost track of time! It felt like only 5 minutes ago that I've started reading this story!! Wow!!!

So so very sweet and wonderful. Thank you to you for giving us such beauty and comfort.

Danielle, I adored this story along with the others from you that I have read.. this one has pulled a special heartstring. Thank you for giving us readers such amazing stories to read.

My mother died of breast cancer recently. Somewhat like Nathan's wife, she never said a word until it was too late. My father was devastated and died shortly after. I sat here an cried, wishing he'd found a mystery woman like "Carlie" to heal his broken heart. You captured Nathan's loving way with his children so perfectly. (I think most female readers are suckers for a primary who's a great dad.) I found the ending of this story a little rocky, as though you had distanced yourself from it and had trouble stepping back into it, but, overall, it's a lovely, romantic Christmas tale. A keeper. Thank you.

Full of emotion, romance, and love. I thought we'd lost Dara there at the end--you gave me a scare--a twist that I hadn't expected. Anyway, I liked your story, and look forward to reading many more of your stories.

I'm in tears. That was a wonderful Christmas story and it's not even Christmas. Again I love your work and this one is definitely up there with all the others that I consider fantastic.

love it, though the sex scene are almost exist but the romance are quite ... you know...ROMANTIC..

keep it up please..

what a lovely story. i was tickled to see you mention my very favorite author, john sanford as well as j.d. robb who i also read. not only do you write well, you have great taste in other authors too! thank you.

DanielleK, this is a really, really great and sweet story. I never cease to be amazed at how you can write in so many genres.

Wonderful simply wonderful.

Never let it be said that you are without talent. I have read and re-read this story and each time it brings a tear. I suspect I am just getting soft in my old age, but that does not deny the truth of what you write. You are good.

You would have to be one of the best, if not the best, writers on this site. Do not deprive us of your talent. Continue to to post your stories.

Your creative skills flow effusively, Ms. DK -- thank you for sharing your special gift with all of us, your loyal readers! (PS, please put out another Christmas-themed story come the latter part of this year; it is quite apropos, after all!)

You knocked the glow out of me with that ambiguous situation

in the church! There are times that shock puts us out of phase.

A lovely story, romanticize me to bits.. Just something to consider Danielle..If you ever find a person dying from exposure not shivering, the first thing you do is to wrap their stomach only, leaving the rest exposed..The blood collects there and has to be started to move again ever so slowly.. The worst thing you can do is to wrap them in aside your fireplace.. Keep them cool start with the stomach and as you see limbs arms etc slowly come to life again you can massage.. This process takes hours, otherwise they probably will die from the shock and gangrene..This lesson I believe was learnt at sea under the second world war (convoys) ..Cheers Yoron

Great story. That little twist near the end was quite cruel, though. I muttered, "No!" and almost stopped reading before I got to the end. :)

scare me at the end! I was so afraid that Carlie/Dara wasn't going to make it. Beautiful story, realistic characters, and a heartwarming read all around. Please keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Made me tear up. Must have something in my eyes. :)

You are rapidly becoming my favorite author. This story was so real. It is a gift to be able to create and present tales like this. I thank you for sharing this with me.

really enjoyed it Yea I like all ur stories there really good

I loved it the first time I read It and I loved it now.. I still cried the 2nd time around.. wonderful story spinner.. Keep up the good positive work DK. You have an amazing gift, and we are truly blessed that you share it with us. :)