All Comments on 'Christmas Gifts'

by Aliyahlovinsex

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Absolutely Moving

I just loved the story and the way it all worked out in the end. Keep writing. please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Awwww

Okay, that's just adorable. For a shameless plug on adoption, it was very well done, and I was interested in the characters and found myself caring about what happened in their relationship, and the sex scene was nice, too. Well done. ^_^

sacksackover 18 years ago
Your best story yet....

Rather than a "shameless plug", I prefer to view this as someone sharing a cause which is near and dear to them. Good luck!

Extreme BohunkExtreme Bohunkover 18 years ago
Beautiful

What a beautiful story! I think this is your best yet.

Very touching.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
So touching...

I had tears running down my face reading this. Thank you for writing something so wonderful for the holidays.

Always, E

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wonderful

truly enjoyed your story and your msg.

v~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The joy of Chrismas

This site has many erotuc stories, BUT this one was a wonderful story to read I STAND IN A LOUD OVATION FOR THIS AUTHOR. The REAL joy of the Christmas season is truely to stand back and watch the joy of others as they truely recieve a gift that they have truely dreamed of!!!!!

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
Well done!

Happy holidays & good luck in the contest! ~Imp

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 18 years ago
Perfect

story for the season. It's filled with love and I liked it a lot.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Lovely

Emotionally moving story that pulls hard on the heart strings. A wonderful capture of the Christmas Spirit. Well Done. Thank You

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Poignant

Coming from someone who just found her adopted sister, I agree with your passion for the topic... This was a beautifully told tale, I really felt the humanity. Good luck in the contest.

rgraham666rgraham666over 18 years ago
Sweet

Perfect for the season.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
Nicely done

Thanks for the touching read, and good luck in the contest.

Rumple

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Beautiful story

and so well told. A definite winner. Good luck in the contest.

cookiejarcookiejarover 18 years ago
What a beautiful story...

A perfect way to set up my day. I felt all warm and happy after this read. Good luck!

Cookie :)

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 18 years ago
A really

sweet story but with some quirks which I will email you about. The sex part was well done too, and fit in perfectly, rather than seeming to be tacked on.

Alex De KokAlex De Kokover 18 years ago
Nice to see ...

... the true spirit of Christmas.

Alex

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hmmm interesting read.

I enjoyed the story. I cannot give criticism, because I am not a writer.

I wish you the best

Anonymous
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