All Comments on 'Christmas Pictures'

Needs extensive proofreading - Please drop the puerile 'daddy' and stick with the adult form 'dad' - The ending was abrupt and therefor unfinished - Lame . . . .

More please

5 stars.

Erin needs to dress up for Daddy in a real photo shoot. Sexy lingerie. Ready to fuck and suck.

Erin should wear a sheer bra, satin garterbelt, sheer stockings with frilly ankle sox and heels that she keeps on while fucking Daddy.

Daddy must cum on her face and she should drink his load.

All the while Brandy is taking the pictures. Maybe even video of Erin talking dirty about how much she loves fucking. How she can't believe they are fucking again. And she's want to fuck her daddy for a long time.

Wrap it up with Brandy and Erin dressed up in hot fuck wear. Dressed in slut wear, garterbelt and stockings frilly ankle sox and heels.

I have thousands of pics of my stepdaughter dressed up in sexy lingerie like described above. Sets in white, black, blue and lite blue. A purple set awaits her.

We haven't fucked yet but I remain hopeful.

More please

The ending ruined whole story!! 1*

Definitely want and need a chapter 2

Good, but needs another chapter or 2.

Thanks for the belated Xmas tale (pun) would really love to read more.

I love that she had a lot of pussy hair. That is real!

Love the story. Hate that the author just left it hanging. I don't believe he'll be finishing it any time soon given that it was written more than 17 years ago!

please do continue

Great Story ! ! !

Please continue and don't leave us hanging...

More it needs a squal

I find the storyline fascinating. Please consider continuing.

Please more. This has me dripping!!!

Pls more

This deserves a sequel! Give me another!

Great story!!! Please continue