All Comments on 'Christmas Shopping Ch. 01'

Pleeeease don't stop there, I wanna read more. This was a great start, it set the scene well and really got me wet too.

Keep it cumming.

Another hot story by a wonderful author! Please keep the stories coming and especially add more chapters to this story!

loved to story. I bet she can't wait to go shopping

Freaking fabulous story! Cant wait for more installments with this family! Keep up the awesome work!

Enjoyed the read. Thank you. Looking forward to much more from you,

MasterTiger

Great story Tiki, I enjoy your writing style.

Loved it, can't wait to read more.

I liked the set-up fin this one. Had so many directions of where it could go. i can't wait for her to learn the truth. I will gladly follow this story wherever you take it. Excellent job

Great job, Tiki, I particularly like the anal tease by the Mom.

Loved it and can't wait to read the rest of the series.

Story is good so far hope there is more !

Ward

With this story I see you mature as a writer and I am loving it, this is an awesome start and I am excited that there are many chapters, expanding your stories in length is a great extension and I am sure you are up to the challenge, I am going to read part 2 now.