All Comments on 'Christmas Shopping Ch. 04 Pt. 01'

Great addition to this story. Loved it. Almost missed it because of the category change. I was going through new story index and almost passed it. Love how it is progressing and looking forward to the finale. Thanks for the pic too, I really enjoyed it.

I'm not sure what else to say that I haven't said before. This was the perfect length, and wonderfully arousing. Ben is a lucky guy. I also think its great that this story came out in November; Christmas shopping is actually starting (already), and soon enough Christmas trees will be going up. The timing makes this story all the more apropos. Thanks!

but we know it's coming in the next chapter. Great set up. Looking forward to it. Five stars here as well.

Wow, I am loving this and you have so improved as a writer from your first efforts, I just can't get enough!