by m_storyman_x
Although too short, this is a marvelous little romance story, beautifully written, with appealing characters and a heart-warming story line. Five stars.
The fortune having so many details brought me out of it, but the rest was amazing. And boy that starting snowball fight tragedy hit true and hard, beautiful.
This might also work well in the Romance category. 5 stars, both ears, and the tail!
Nice read...waaaay tooo short! A little heavy on the gypsy deux ex machina add in to resolve all the threads.... still a good read 5 stars
Liked it, but part 2 is needed. For one thing, the daughter needs to apologize, and more background on Juliana.
Or not: it's your story.
Wonderful Romantic Erotic story! I’m sure that there wasn’t much age difference between Juliana and the daughter which likely didn’t help with finding dad in bed and having great sex with a younger woman. Dad can back up his story by the call to OnStar. Yes, it was a sad start but the rescue and surprise twist with the fortune teller story was Great. It do deserve one or two more chapters to answer questions and if his children and grandchildren except her and him. Thank You!
What a great story, but it is not finished based on the ending and really needs a second chapter with a happily ever after ending. Since this was only posted 4 months ago maybe the author will finish the story. So far this gets my 5 star vote.
One again, 6*.
It was beyond perfect. Your ending was exactly right. No more needed here.
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When's chapter two?? This at least my second reading and still no chapter two.
Wonderful story! If she stays, hopefully she'll say," Adam, my love, we are having twins,. I think you had better become my husband". "Oh I, and the babies love you more than life".
Wonderful story! If she stays, hopefully she'll say," Adam, my love, we are having twins,. I think you had better become my husband". "Oh I, and the babies love you more than life".
W O W !
Great Rescue !
This is surely a couple of steps up from, "Come to dinner this Sunday & meet My Family !
THANKS !
Well.... Improbable, mystery, silly, punchy, fun, twist ending....
It felt like an adult episode of a Twilight Zone style anthology show. I quite enjoyed it!