by HLD
Excellent story. good development, likeable characters, and hot. Let's not forget hot.
Thanks.
Adorable. Funny, hot, sexy, realistic all at once. Fans of the song will love it. And it reminded me of my first time with the voluptuous woman I married. Thanks!
A fine Christmas tale, eroticism and sexual energy to spare. 5+ at least
I really enjoyed the part of the phone call with her parents during sex! Hillarious and showed that they really cared for each other.
very nice story with a great ending. the beginning was a bit tedious but well worth it. 5*+
Fantastic story, good flow, awesome characters!! I want MORE!! Merry Christmas!!
Loved the story! Loved the playfulness! Loved the humor! 5* May you have a wonderfully Merry Christmas! 🎄
Welcome back, you were missed during your time away. As always you have the best characters going. Please keep writing and submitting them here.
Great little story; so well written. Hope this author enjoys writing as much as this reader and I’m sure others enjoy his works.
@HLD Hey! Its a great narration...it just flowed...The almost monologue in the first page didn't even stop me for a second..."chore-gasms" and other things like that are great...Loved it