by allan8d8
A well written story, and two installments less than a week apart from each other? What more could a girl want?! Please please continue with this story. It needs a bit of polishing in places, but overall its much better than 75% or even 80% of the posts on this site. Keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!
A well written story, and two installments less than a week apart from each other? What more could a girl want?! Please please continue with this story. It needs a bit of polishing in places, but overall its much better than 75% or even 80% of the posts on this site. Keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well written and interesting. I can't wait for more. Great job!
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