All Comments on 'Cinder's Women: Mouse's Tale Ch. 02'

by LordHyperion

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wow

This one was even better than the first chapter, I love the way you have detail everything. It would make a fabulous book to add to my collection You are and awesome writer cant wait for chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
love it

it was great cant wait for the rest

LKinkoLKinkoover 19 years ago
Excellent addition

Bit long for my personal taste but I know it?s necessary to introduce the characters. I truly enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Glowing ass = not erotic

A woman's body is SO much more sexy when it is not disfigured by tears, welts etc. And the attempts to justify treating people as objects are laughable.

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