by LordHyperion
This one was even better than the first chapter, I love the way you have detail everything. It would make a fabulous book to add to my collection You are and awesome writer cant wait for chapter 3.
Bit long for my personal taste but I know it?s necessary to introduce the characters. I truly enjoyed it.
A woman's body is SO much more sexy when it is not disfigured by tears, welts etc. And the attempts to justify treating people as objects are laughable.