All Comments on 'Cinnamon's Secrets Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A pleasant afternoon

Nice erotic description of a pleasant afternoon for you. Its clear that you love to fuck.

widowedidiotwidowedidiotover 2 years ago
Boring...

I read this two chapters but I didn't see anything remarkable or new, just a repetition of the same old stories. I couldn't understand why the author didn't care what people thought of his writing, I see now. Sometimes, if you listen to your readers, you can see whats missing or where you're tripping and learn to write better stories that your readers will really like and recommend to other readers. otherwise your reading pool is going to start to shrink to where production will start refusing to carry your writings anymore. But you don't care. Right?

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