All Comments on 'Cityslicker Cousin Ch. 05'

I'll leave it to others to be critical of the editing and say only that this is one of the hotter incest tales I've read. Thanks for sharing a great imagination!

Phew. What an adventure!

A very good story well done.If you had someone proof read you will be one of the best easy. Thank you for your hard work I want those twins bad.

Most stories all the women have huge DDD or double E breaststhis is a nice respite because some of us love small boobies

Man this series is going in my fans, but a proof reader woulda been nice( i.e. "Eightieth birthday").

I couldn't stop playing with myself!

I hope you are writing another chapter because this is fucking hot as hell

Yes, it seems like there is a lot more to go, and Herb hasn't even joined the party yet, and nobody's ass has gotten broken in yet. Maybe Sadie should go first with her ass since she is the newest and show the rest the way. It could be a contest to see who gets their ass worked on.

Your writing has trapped me in the story. Please continue this story, don't leave us wanting.

Please learn how to use there vs their and your vs you're. It took me out of the moment.

Regardless oh the grammar, I thought the stories were great! I hope there is a continuation to this, I'd like to know what happens after the campout.

Nicely done. I enjoyed the entire series. The plot while common for two or three was much better with a larger cast and the seeds have been sown for an even bigger group. Can't wait.

Very enjoyable, thanks.

Really, really awesome series.