All Comments on 'Claimed'

I an honestly say, I held my breath... when she said...Crìsdean Anthony.... please be a finisher of story telling. An not leave it hanging. Waiting 4 the next chapter...

Wow!! Best story I have read on here in ages!! You have a knack :) Hot Hot Hot!!

You have serious skills! Wonderfully written. Please don't stop. You are meant to do this. I'm hooked and will be very disappointed if you don't continue. Thank you for this excellent beginning. ~K.

Thst was an excellent beginning more plz

Strong story and seriously HOT......hoping there is more coming

I read this maybe about a week ago, on the other site that you are on, and I was hooked. I really hope you continue this story.

What a wonderful story, so well-written. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Excellent development of the theme. I hope there will be more to come.

Great story so far...can't wait to read more

I hope you continue this.

Well written, brilliant build up and left me wanting more.

Keep the chapters coming - can't wait to see what happens next!

NWLundonGirl xoxo

Need to read more.. hahaha!!!!

Please more!

Loved this... I can't wait to read more of any of your stories...

I was hooked when he growled when Paul got close!! SEXY!!

Looking forward to more from you!!

can hardly wait for your next chapter. keep writing please.

I'd love to see this one continue!

Please tell me there's gonna be more chapters. So good and steamy! I need more...

Please don't end this storyline here. We are hooked now. More, please!

I really enjoyed reading Claimed. It starts with a beautifully romantic storyline, and not to mention the great sex scenes. Please, please submit another installment of this story...you've got a fan in me. 5 stars!!!

So freaking good, sexy, hot all the above and more. Please write more. I'm in love!!!!

You are far from just the average writer. This could be the beginning to a great series. Hope to see more of Claimed soon.

please please PLEASE, continue the story. it's so different. I will be keeping watch.

Please tell me that this story isn't over!!

I hope that there is more coming soon.

Those 3 words, made my lady parts weep! That was AWESOME, and would not mind being claimed like that! Please continue and make this a full series. I can see myself reading about Crisdean and Asia for the next 40 or so chapters! 5 HUGE Stars!

I am so appreciative that you have read and commented on my story. It is something that you do not have to do and I thank you for going through the trouble.

"Claimed" has caught me and will not let me go. So, I am continuing the story. It is going to take a while because my story line is recreating the creation myths and mixing it with a current threat. I hope that you hang in there with me. I am trying not to disappoint my readers.

Life has loosened its noose a bit and I have much more time to dedicate to my erotic writing. I plan to do just that. Keep your eyes open. I will have a post up before the month is out. Promise.

Thanks again,

AvrgBlkGrl

I was searching Literotica for a good read and happen to come across your story after trying at least a dozen other stories. You certainly have a gift for creative writing. The narrative sucked me in and got me all "excited" ; ) I hope you continue writing this story. The only thing worse than poorly written stories are the good stories that leave you hangin' : '''' (

Very good!

love this and my name is asia ..bonus

This is my first story here..really liked it..:)

I have read this story several times anxiously hoping that the next chapter has been posted. Just as she was claimed, Asia needs to claim her man. I will be checking back for the next installment .Hopefully it will be soon! !!

So crazy had never read a story where the the female had my name and description ... Def a fav!

That was amazing! Please please please write more! Such incredible detail and beauty and characterization and heat and I can't get enough! I need more of this incredible story and unbearably sexy mating!

Please say there will be more to come

Yes, another part would be a nice update, it is well written and deserves to be finished. It is unique because how you imply there is such a deep connection between them, one that has been dormant for centuries but always remained between them. If you are stuck for a continued part she could be reincarnated and he had been searching for her, just suggestion though. Too bad those kind of deep soul connections are so rare, hard to find. Thanks for writing.

I hope to read some more of this.

Well written story.

Deliciously thrilling and tempting!

Keep it up!

Please keep going with this! I absolutely love it! You're absolutely my favorite author here!

Please write more soon!

Love this story. Please continue this story.

CONTINUE PLEEEEEAAASEEEE!!!

Please continue this story!!

Please continue the story :,(

I somehow like the ending as it it but the romantic side of me want to know what happen next.

Nonetheless, I love your story! Especially because it's a shifter story where soulmates and true love do really exist. And the way you wrote your story and your unique idea of how mates in shifter story works fascinates me.

Omg...this needs to be a series! Make it happen, people!

Wonderful. I don't wait for a series, though - this was the perfect point to end it, with the knowledge what would eventually happen.

Omg, where is part 2?

WOW! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I normally dislike the werewolf and vampire type of stories because I find them to be too cringey, to be honest if I has known this was a werewolf story I wouldn’t have read it. That being said, this is one of my favorite stories period! It’s just written so well and I like that it doesn’t have any weird/cringey stereotypes. Best accidental read ever!!!

I love werewolf stories. Bravo dear author, this is a good one. Sexy as hell and it leaves me wanting more.

Part 2???!