by ostinatobravado
part was the breathing on her and her reaction to it. Keep writing!
I never can understand why people who aren't intrigued or aroused by non-consent/reluctance stories read them. Ces't la vie.
I thought this was a good story, although I would recommend getting an editor to help you with sentence structure etc. Keep it up!
Not bad, keep workin at it! :)
P.S. Stupid people who don't like reading/hearing about rape should stop reading non-consent stories.
wonderful story! strangely enough, i'm working on a story just like this one. hopefully i'll see more!
and if you don't like these kind of stories, pressing the alt + f4 keys works wonders ;)
I came three times reading your story. And bit my lip so hard it bled. More, please more.
I really enjoyed this story. It is one of my favourites. But you need to work on your sentence structure.
Keep up the good work!
OMG. That was so hot!!! I want a man to take me like that!!
I was soaking wet, really good story and I hope you continue writing.
Oh my god that was amazing one of the best I've read so far and trust me it had me so wet I wad on the verge of coming.... Hope you write alot more
Safe comment:very good....
Naughty comment: *quivering under force of orgasm
Yes, raging boner the whole way thru, please write more, I agree with other readers, if you can't separate non consent from reality your just an ignorant fucktard!
So hot, made me dripping wet...
The variations on teacher:student fantasy are usually highly erotic unfortunately this one just came across as a straightforward non erotic rape, I read him as being angry and psychotic. There’s a vast difference between non consent and reluctance. I’m not trying to kink shame (far from it, promise!), even if it seems like it. You left a lot of info off the Tags, by emphasising the catholic schoolgirl (= no contraception) trope pushed this towards a “breeder” type of story. For me that’s a massive turn off. (Again that’s my problem not yours or anyone else’s)
Best of luck with your writing
Tess (uk)