All Comments on 'Clarisse Ch. 01'

by Tallguy64

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marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Nice Chapter!!!!

That was a nice first Chapter to this series. I like how she was able to get away and he was able to help her get away. I can hardly wait to see what happens in the next chapter with her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Lord no!

Low camp, turgid dialogue. Cmon man, gotta try harder.

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