All Comments on 'Clayton and Snake'

After "Oz," reading about prison sex where the two guys don't end up killing each other is a definite relief. Nice job. best, Ken

This was extremely well written. You should be proud of this story. I'm sure it took effort to write, but I'm glad you did. I truly enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

This story was very confusing and clichè. Took alot of work but make sure you're alot more clear on the story itself.

I worked in a prison once, in a very liberal town, and it corresponded to the Clayton and Snake situation. Every attempt was made to team up prisoners in pairs or threes according to sexual roles, length of sentence, and other factors, and prisoners were allowed to switch cells in order to achieve a better sexual match. The administration would never admit to what was going on, but it was definitely a good idea, because the prisoners were, by and large, well satisfied during their incarceration. Anal bottoms were always in short supply. Consequently, wherever possible, a bottom was put into a cell housing two tops. The threesomes often continued after release, and rarely got into any more crime because they were afraid they would not be assigned to the same situation. The bottoms like the threesome arrangement while in prison, and often asked for that rather than a single cellmate.