All Comments on 'Cleaning for Mr Quin'

by geronimo_appleby

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Absolutely filthy.

Loved it. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Now that's a story!!

Vulpine, Truculent, Treacly, such vocabulary;

I don't usually look up words while I'm reading Lit stories.

You write beautifully. Good story, great style.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
awesome

That was great! I would love to read more about this threesome.

goodgurlgetsbadgoodgurlgetsbadalmost 12 years ago

So naughty & too freaking funny - LOL ; love it

DonGraham333DonGraham333almost 11 years ago
Good One.

Geronimo,

This is a good one, I liked it lot.

A stretch of the imagination but I liked it.

You may wonder why I am suddenly reading all your work?

I have hurt my back and I am laid up. I am enjoying your work, hoping one day I will be able to produce stories half as good as yours.

Don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Filthy

...this is becoming a common theme. I love your writing. Your stories are filthy, surprising, imaginative and beautifully executed. Fabulous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Disappointed!!!!!!!

That it was so short. I would have loved him to have fucked Becky as well.

Now I’ve got my complaint out of the way can I just say how much I absolutely loved this story. I particularly enjoyed how you turned Adele from the reluctant party into the big cock loving slut, you’re description of her cunt being filled with spunk and how it oozed out oh her had me so hard.

Yet again a fabulous story from “The Master” of erotic fiction.

Keep up the good work.

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Walking the earth, having adventures and shit. Not looking for any hook-ups, I just want to get me stories out there and have a chat on the forums.