All Comments on 'Cleaning Her Kitchen'

Not a bad for a first story, but how about a description of the characters, esp. the domme. You are on the right track and should keep writing. I would prefer to see you keep the man on man sex out of it. It happens in so many series already.

Please consider this as constructive criticism.

Love the story... that initial pee-panty training is pretty hot, too! You've got me tenting mine!

But I found myself wondering about the things that are missing...the motivation in the sub...the why behind his choices and his acceptance of his Dom's decisions for him. It is the why that is so fascinating for me and I would love to see you explore that if you continue this story.