by sirhugs
That's the best last line ever! LOL Loved this, Sirhugs. Especially the farmer's daughters and the swarthy friend at the beginning. *chuckle* Poor Barry. :)
Very imaginative. Maybe a tad slow in the beginning but the ending was original and well-done. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
A nice read there sirhugs. I loved the beginning. . .Ahhh the memories of being a farmer's daughter, well... mine weren't that good. lol. . .I liked the end too. I wasn't expecting it. Great twists. ~ Red.
Interesting, convoluted tale, possibly too many characters, but an enjoyable read none the less.
I loved what you did with this tale, Sirhugs! "Cliffhanger" is a wonderfully clever title for it. The backpacking flashback was a fun little twist in the beginning to get a feel for the kind of guy Barry was.
:)
And, of course, your description of sex is delicious!
Another review is on its way! ;)
Fantastic read, what a super plot what a great ending and so well paced throughout the whole thing, brilliant.